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Two Girls and a Doll

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         Drawing by Renelle Sommerville

When Reni sent me this sketch I just knew I had to write about it.  The only question was what to write.  I just thank her very sincerely for sharing it with me and allowing me to use it and write about it.  A very, very talented young lady!


With December coming, her heart fills with fear
For that is the special time when she will hear
Of Christmas and Santa, and as that time nears,
The little one tries hard to swallow her fears.

She’s often found hiding upstairs ‘neath her bed.
No visions of sugar plums dance in her head.
The talk about presents are words left unsaid,
She hears about sorrow and hunger instead.


Then one day there came a light knock at her door,
And Reni, caught up in her e’er present chores
Of washing the dishes and scrubbing the floors,
Was trapped in a corner and down on all fours.

With horrified look and a whispered, "oh no!"
Poor Reni called out in a voice soft and low.
She wasn’t quite sure she'd been heard, although
She saw someone framed in the doorway's pale glow.

A small girl her own size, perhaps about eight
Had somehow appeared and would alter her fate.
She smiled and she waved and then said, "My name’s Kate.
I certainly hope that I’m not here too late.

I hope you don’t think I am being a pest,
But all of my life I've been loved and been blessed."
Then seeing the bundle clutched tight to her breast,
Our down-trodden Reni waved in her new guest.

She stared at her friend with her eyes open wide,
And then squinting a bit, she tried to decide,
What the bundle was she was trying to hide,
And why she had brought this mys'try  inside.

Kate held out her arms, a smile on her face,
The glow of it certainly brightened this place.
Then she held the doll out, the one she called Grace,
And so quickly gave it a final embrace.

"Merry Christmas," she said with the kindest grin.
"I thank you so much for inviting me in."
A soft, teary quiver of Reni’s small chin,
A wonderful friendship that would now begin.

Author notes

Just trying to write about a very nice picture.
Written November 9th, 2006

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  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    This is a beautiful tribute to a gorgeous picture... Both of you should be very proud of your artistic talents here. All the best!


  • Ishtar
    November 24, 2007

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    I really do love the poem. AND the border.
    You know, I can't remember noticing it the first time I came here. LOL.


    Yes, I'm aware that this is my second comment. Every now and then, I revisit these things -WHEN- I should be doing calculus.


  • Ellis gold member
    November 22, 2007

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    this is a fine addition to this world

    Two girls with appreciation for one another
    each who is not a sister or a mother
    both who see good in the person of the other
    whose common interests will take them still further

    --Ellis


  • Dragon-Tearz13
    June 28, 2007

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    I got chills!! WOW!!! That poem was an awesome interpretation of the picture!! I loved this poem!! Way to go!!


  • catz Moderators member
    April 21, 2007

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    I don't know if I would have written this kind of poem from this picture, we all see something a little different, but your interpretation is without fault and is so heartwarming in the end. The sadness expressed throughout most of the poem is quickly dissipated by Kate's appearance at Reni's door.

    It's hard to imagine a child without Christmas, the sadness they must feel. You've expressed very well, the heartbreak this little girl felt and the acceptance of her lot. Thank goodness for the hope which came knocking on her door that fateful day.

    Both your poem and Reni's picture are wonderful


    Dee


  • My Solitude
    April 4, 2007

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    PRICELESS!

    Hats off to Renelle Sommerville and kudos to you Sir!!! This is a great piece of art, both the poem and the painting. Wonderful story about love, friendship and celebration there. Enjoyed the read much.
    Always, Bob.

    P.S. You've just been hood-winked by the Poetic Bandits Group.


  • paullallady silver member
    December 19, 2006

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    wonderful and touching

    What a wonderful piece of poetry you have written. The message of sharing, of brightening someones day or life, even just a little is such a good one, at any time of year. I love the rythem and flow. You are such a wonderful talent, it is amazing.


  • Faerie Me
    November 10, 2006
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    Almost missed this one!! What a wonderful story about the kindness of strangers.

  • Ishtar
    November 10, 2006
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    This was such a wonderful and sentimental poem, Paul.
    I'm glad you liked that little picture as much as I did.

    Be well, sir, and write always.
    -Reni


  • daviscth silver member
    November 10, 2006
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    This is such a beautiful poem you constructed from the picture. I enjoyed reading it very much. A brilliant job of writing my friend, Cathy

  • t825143
    November 10, 2006
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    This is such a beautiful poem


  • Veronica Leigh
    November 10, 2006
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    AWWWW! I love this! It is so sweet and so heartfelt! Once again you did an amazing job!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!

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