This is an unnatural evil between us
…A demonic love if you will
This is a white fire, spilling my jaded hope
that the carcass of our love will resurrect
and leave me whole again
Yet I cannot quit you
This desolation without you leaves me fractured
My hands bleed for you
I taste you now, only your blood upon my pale lips
Dead is your devotion
This…
Summer time in December –
Is the chilling heat of your nonexistence
Paralyzing me into anger
How I wish upon the rain to fall
Let me wash away the sins
That leave me needing you
Somehow I hate you
But you leave me wanting more
With broken wings of a butterfly
Flutter now so far away
Just another life, my dear
I will pick up my damaged soul
In search of another euphoria
Quite like ours once was
Author notes
OMG I love the challenge contests with words!! They are so fun...and...challenging...yes of course. 
I already said that. So my basic idea was to fit as many words as possible but try make some amount of sense... My final tally came out to be six phrases and seventeen words. I ran into an extreme case of writings block half way through - so ...yeah sorry this isn't top-notch. 
I'll come back if I can manage and place a better piece.
Written November 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- Desecration is the Sweetest Form of Honour by Allure of a Rose.
325 points, ended November 17, 2006, 7 entries
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Comments
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Wow. I like. Mucho.
'This is a white fire, spilling my jaded hope
that the carcass of our love will resurrect
and leave me whole again'
I think this is my favorite part....it's very vivid and dark...romanctic. Just b-e-a-u-tiful.
Haha. I miss you guys so much!!! Tell Billy I say hello as well, okay? He always pouts if I don't say hi to him too. Basically this is amazing and you're amazing, so it just goes together...
love,
Lindsey
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Fantastic
There's always one poem that has what I'm looking for in it. Granted, sometimes I like another one better, but I still love the one that has what I wanted, this is that one. You have the flow, the words, the phrases, the class... Excellent job. The only thing I would have asked of you, is to make it a bit darker.
-Allura
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Wowzah. This is pretty amazing and you used a lot of the words!! Excellent job babe. It's really good. Something about this is somewhat seductive...sensual yet angry. Lovely Darling!!
Love it!
love,
Katrina
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