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If For One Moment (10 lines)

If for one moment
I could express to you
how I truly feel
I would take you in my arms
and run my fingers through your hair
look deep into those eyes of blue

and softly brush my lips against yours
to let you know
my beating heart
beats only for you

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Written November 9th, 2006

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  • Endeavor gold member
    November 10, 2006
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    Excellent

    Brenda, your words of love have just sored up of late. Do you have a happy explination,

    this was my favorite part

    If for one moment
    I could express to you
    how I truly feel
    I would take you in my arms
    run my fingers through your hair
    look deep into those eyes of blue
    and softly brush my lips against yours
    to let you know
    my heart beats
    only for you


    Just Excellent

    Rick

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  • Shakes-spear
    November 10, 2006
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    You should express your thoughts. Who knows he may be shy too! Love ya Sis, The Shaker


  • mypassion
    November 9, 2006
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    thanks for the applause and support...God bless you and yours, Brenda

  • mypassion
    November 9, 2006
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    thanks..I am glad you liked it. Brenda


  • CourtneyJean
    November 9, 2006
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    This is a wonderful write! It flows greatly, has an interesting rhyme scheme, and is easy to relate to when you love someone. Good job


  • mypassion
    November 9, 2006
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    Thanks for commenting. I do know him but our worlds are totally different maybe someday I will tell him but for know it will stay within my thoughts. Brenda

  • lovekillz
    November 9, 2006
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    my heart beats only for you.


    simply beautiful.

  • bowmore bill
    November 9, 2006
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    plain and simple.

    Simple but effective, straight to the point ,well done.
    Ps...Do you know this person?
    Or are you just shy?


  • mypassion
    November 9, 2006
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    thanks for the reading and showing me your support. God bless you and yours, Brenda

  • hollisterx3wilson
    November 9, 2006
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    aww this is beautiful. i love it!!

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