i can tell you all my secrets
but you never think i'm serious
and i am wasting my time just to let you know
how I really feel
it's so hard to say the words
when they're trapped between these walls
and you can't hear me at all
at all.
cutting you off my skin
cannot stand to have you so close
everything you say seems like a lie
and i was stupid in the first place to
think that you and i
were...something.
maybe...
I...
it doesn't matter.
you go left
and I
will turn right.
switch off the lights
say Good-night and Good-Bye to
your first love.
wave farewell
no I will never see you again.
i can tell you all my secrets
how i really feel
but you never think i'm serious....
darling, you are childish
and i am foolish
i carry a heart
it weighs like a rock
cold and rough
you break me open with your hammer
break me open
crush me into pieces...
i was stupid to think
that we were...something.
maybe...
I....
it doesn't matter.
you turn left
i will go right
say Good-night and Good-Bye to your
first love.
wave
farewell...
the sky turns black
and they say love makes the world go round...
and they say love makes the world go round...
love makes me wish i...
it doesn't matter...
Author notes
sorry if the lyrics seem confusing. going through this weird phase. nothing is making sense to me right now.
For contest: the above comment tells you how!! lol. but i will say this: the phase was that i was having some trouble letting go of someone because i had not forgiven them of some things. we were talking one day and I got really pissed off with him. hence-the song.
Written November 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- Write me a world, write me a rhyme, write me a tale of yours and mine. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
400 points, ended December 19, 2006, 34 entries
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Comments
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You forgot to capitalize a lot of the I's, that's what I noticed... lol. Also, I love the way you go and I... Then say never mind. It makes it sound like you are actually talking to someone instead of just talking to yourself like a mad woman (like most of my songs do lol). Thanks for entering and good luck!
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i like it =0
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