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i hope you can see the real me


i got angry and mad
i only get mad because i miss you and I am sad
i just felt lonely and bad
i hope you can see
the girl you are with in jersey is the real me
i love you
so true
without you i miss apart of me
apart that brings me so much happiness you see
so I am sorry if i get mad
i just hope you know its because i miss you so bad
i just hope my love is so strong
we can know that we still love each other if we do something wrong

Author notes

for my bf because i miss him at uni but i get moody with him but i don't mean it but i just miss him so much
Written November 9th, 2006

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  • gingleberry
    February 15, 2007

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    Do you see him often, it must be crap not being able to see him whenever you two want to see each other. I dont think id be as strong as you, i'd have to find someone else.

  • nikki4
    November 9, 2006
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    thanks so much for your comment i really Am thankful i think a good comment is so good to give!

  • nikki4
    November 9, 2006
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    thanks so much for commenting a nice coment this in it self just makes someone smile

  • nikki4
    November 9, 2006
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    thanks so much for commenting its like a little push of goodness for some1 thanks


  • Shadow Keeper
    November 9, 2006
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    Hey, cool poem you have here. I am sure your boyfriend understands. I understand though that it is hard being away at university too because I am there myself and miss people back home as well. Nice job with this poem though. I enjoyed reading it!

  • mysterious heart
    November 9, 2006
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    great

    awww what a great poem hun. this is a great way to explain why you act like you do, because sometimes feeling like this can be so hard to explain to the ones you love. great poem
    luv k x


  • dark black rose-
    November 9, 2006
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    Awesome poem, keep up the good work!

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