Secrets {Palindrome}

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Ok this is not my norm for poetry so I hope it doesn't offend anyone.  I chose to write a palindrome.  But, this picture did inspire this way of thinking for me toward my husband.   It is a beautiful picture.  
Picture credit...'Moonlit Magic' by Al Hogue Thanks for reading
Because He Lives,
Beka
Written November 9th, 2006

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A contest entry

• ~ Form Poetry Challenge #1 ~ by -LilacThOughts-. 300 points, ended November 13, 2006, 12 entries
  • next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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  -LilacThOughts-
  November 23, 2006
  
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  Just delightful Beka, your husband is a very lucky man for this picture to inspire you to write this super Palindrome with him in your thoughts, that's love
  
  You have some lovely lines, I believe it's your first attempt you've managed to pen a great Palindrome poem...
  
  I'm taken up with the second half of the poem, it reads remarkably well, more often than not it is very hard to get this section to read sensibly and keep emotion flowing...you have achieved that here, plus it's wrapped in a sense of this piece being very personal, as if we shouldn't be reading it just beautiful
  
  Love and smiles
  ~Lilac
  
  
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    Mamabekaboo
    December 14, 2006
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    Lilac

    Thank you for the wonderful comment. I do not get to come online much as being 6 months pregnant gets me tired much faster. I just do what I have to and go back to bed, LOL. Thanks again for the great contest and the HM. I hope you had fun with it.
    Because He Lives,
    Beka
• Mamabekaboo
  November 13, 2006
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  Thank you for such a nice comment. I appreciate it. My thoughts were on my husband while writing this poem as he is the Love of my life. Thanks again.
  Because He Lives,
  Beka
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  Mamabekaboo
  November 13, 2006
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  Thank you for the welcome Lilac.
  Because He Lives,
  Beka
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  Arkbear
  November 12, 2006
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  very pretty ~

  Wow....I can't believe the beauty of such a write ~
  This is really pretty ~
  best of luck to you in the contest.....a lot of pretty ones entered already....this is no exception ~
  Well done ~
  the Bear ~
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  -LilacThOughts-
  November 10, 2006
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  A warm welcome to you Mamabekaboo
  
  Love and smiles ~Lilac

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