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. i believe in our love.

I was sitting outside tonight,
just gazing at the sky.
Looking at all the beautiful stars
and thinking how they shine no matter what.

That made me think of us.
Think about the wonderful life we have together.
We've been through some hurt,
we've been through some pain,
but still we shine through.

They say the first couple of months
are the hardest ever in a relationship.
I'm so glad that through even the most drama,
we still made it.
For that, I'm thankful.

I know a lot of things
will come our way.
Temptations will arise
and pain will never disappear.
But I believe in us,
I believe in our love.

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for derek...
Written November 9th, 2006

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  • Waterfall07
    December 1, 2006
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    Oh Nikki I always love what you write and I always will


  • Lionslove silver member
    November 17, 2006
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    BEAUTIFUL

    ..BEAUTIFUL WORDS FROM A BEAUTIFUL HEART...

    .......................Lionslove

  • HoldMe
    November 15, 2006
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    This is a very, very beautiful poem...like the words just read perfectly and honestly and sincerely and it's easy to see that you genuinely love the person this poem is about...also, I liked the comparison to the star thing a lot too!


  • Falon
    November 10, 2006
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    this is really beautiful... Derek is a lucky guy. The emotions were real and it shows through your words. Best of luck in love i hope all goes well for you. Love is not always easy.
    Falon


  • bedazzled
    November 10, 2006
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    Simple and lovely


  • eyesofanangel524
    November 10, 2006
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    What a beautiful love poem. So beautifully displayed. Emotions clearly spoken. Love is beautiful and kind and needs nurturing. All too often when it gets tough people turn and run...when love is real we stand our ground, find the will to fight it through, to survive. Best of luck to you and your love. May happiness fill your nights and love fill your days. Dawn

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