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Girl Meets Boy

Verse One

I know you’re doubting me
And I have been waiting for you
But darling, don’t go running out on me
Not just yet
Not with so much left to say


Chorus

Girl meets boy
And something happens
Something sparks, something changes
And I will never be the same
I’m your girl
Eternally


Verse Two

You know I’m loving you
And you have been hiding from me
There is no way you can leave now boy
Give me a chance
There’s so much left for me to do


Chorus


Bridge

Running will get you nowhere
‘Cause I will wait forever
When I met you something sparked
Bringing on a change
A change in my heart now darling


Chorus X2


Outro

Eternally yours
Your girl...

Author notes


Written November 9th, 2006

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  • a u r a
    November 22, 2006
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    I really liked this one- it tickled my romantic bone pink You have given a wonderful feel to the song with your lyrics- I am sure it would make a chartbuster song


  • Forever-Damned
    November 10, 2006
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    This is amazing! Suck wonderful happy lyrics!! Good work!


  • Poet of the Past
    November 9, 2006
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    great

    thats really good keep it up


  • nowherekid
    November 9, 2006
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    lovely

    awhhh this is really beautiful. i love the word choice, so simple yet so incredibly elegant. My favorite part is this line: "Running will get you nowhere
    ‘Cause I will wait forever" because it just seems so...intriging. the imagery is beautiful, waiting forever. An eternity. the backround and color choice are also beautiful. keep it up and write your heart out.