She makes me feel so free, she makes me want to be me, she makes me feel like I'm worth something when everyone else makes me feel like I'm nothing, shes everything i never knew i wanted and she is everything more, she is the only one i hate saying goodbye to because then we have to start over with hello, shes the one i never want to let go, shes the one that brightens my day when theirs a storm outside, shes the one that made me enjoy life, shes the only one that told me to put down the knife
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Written November 8th, 2006
A contest entry
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A very powerful piece, very well written. Thank you for your fine entry in this contest.
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I Love It Chris! I think you have a great talent and you are finaly uncovering it, just keep digging (about everything not me lol) I hope this is a cool place for you to show who you are and publish some more stuff. Love You hun ttyl
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Hey! I thought that this was a really good write...Keep on writing and I hope to stumble upon some more of your wonderful works.
~!~Manda~!~
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