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Ozymandias (the sequel)

Ozymandias (the sequel) 






Sentencing Saddam on Saturday


Was pretty desperate stuff


Sentencing Saddam on Saturday


Didn't save your butt




Donald did his damnedest


but Donald had to go


And the wonder I have about Donald is


Who actually ran the show?







Author notes


Written November 8th, 2006

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A contest entry

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  • Revwilliamfoos
    November 9, 2006
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    great write but if you read www.allpoetry.com/poem/2321876 you will know what is going to become of donnie saddam only killed 148 and he will be lynched the bush team killed over 650,000 and will never be brought to justice because he wrote a law to cover his ass keep doing well
    love papa


  • chills gold member
    November 9, 2006
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    Cant make up my mind on the political issue here. On the basis that two wrongs don't make a right, I'm against death penalties. However, haven't we interfered with the way of life there enough??


  • cvillelisa
    November 8, 2006
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    A good friend told me the new guy is evil as well -- something about the Iran Contra stuff.

    Hi Vic. Even when you are letting it rip there is something about your stuff that makes you want to laugh but in the laughter there is just complete uncomfortableness- like we really shouldn't be laughing but what the eff else can we do. Well we can resoundly vote as many of us did but still you really have a knack for that .. tone. Good stuff.

    Great to see something here from you. The contest was really supposed to close at 3 Eastern Standard Time but I'm still reading and commenting on everything that came in.

    Hope you are well.

    Lisa