your the ghost of what could have been
i don't even know where to begin
with each new day i think you'll came back to me
i don't know what i can do or say to help you see
i can't even fathom the reason you went away
every time i hold your picture close my thoughts start to gray
it so hard to see this life
knowing your the one who should have been my wife
it's so hard to live with out you
i just wish i really knew
i bit down hard when you walked out the door
with each step my heart tore a little more
now i have a hole to fill
no one will ever meet the bill
i will love you forever and always
your love will be in my heart till the end of days
life is love and love is loss
Author notes
this is a re-write of nathan tim's poem 'As you leave'.
i hope you guys like it
Written November 8th, 2006
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Real good.. want some more
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awww
Dirk this is so sad and trust me buddy i started cryin when i read this and man i kno how u fill wit this on im goin thru it now and well i can't take it but hey great poem i really liked it and u could really feel ur emotions comming out of this keep up the work
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Ilove this, its nice to see you writing again! hope to see more soon!
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omgoodness I really like this. Such a heartfelt piece. NICE.
amanda
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nicely done, i think it is a good likeness and you should get your 80 points, i will send them to you asap. well thanks for putting in the authors comments that it was a rewrite of my poem. thanks very much, i enjoy this recreation very much.
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