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i crossed the line

everything i say has been said
i layed every where but next to your head
did i make the right choice to walk away
things are to clouded over, things became grey
when i look at the pictures we shared
i see another cross that has been bared
this shit is branded on my chest for a life time
it hard to relize i walked away from a dime
you was everything i wanted and more
i'll never find another to beat that score

one two three here i go
how else can i let this love show
only now thatits gone can i express how i feel
i'm sorry that i made this deal
i sold my soul and the price was cheap
still in my dreams your words i keep
"you crossed the line"
i did and i lost the only person that was mine

you where the girl that dreams are made of
it spread fast because we build it with love
i dreamt of you each time i layed my head down for the night
some times i layed it in the wrong places so we started to fight
i still stand by the fact that i didn't do what you thought was done
this just isn't a game that can be won

so these are my last words on the subject of me and you
i just wish you knew what was really true

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no comment i dont even know what to say
Written November 8th, 2006

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  • xBeautifulxHellx
    November 9, 2006
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    Yeah everyone hears it and im sick of hearing it myself butg I am here if you need to talk. im not much help sometimes but I can surprise people. I really liked it though and it some ways I can relate to it....later

    ~Andrea


  • TearsofSorrow666
    November 8, 2006
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    awww dirk this was so good i love this piece i cryed b/c i thought of that man that just left me and did not care but i kno how u feel i kno i won't come across another guy like him but i guess the love i felt for him was real but his love was not but keep up the awesome work this piece had alot of emotion to it i could feel that... and i can see how ur heart feels...


  • xXxThat GurlxXx
    November 8, 2006
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    Joker666~
    Hey! I liked this piece...Keep on writing.
    ~!~Manda~!~