I know I'm going out with you,
and saying 'I love you' is the rule.
But what if I don't feel the same?
If we break up will I get the blame?
I know you really like me,
so how could I make you see
how it really feels inside, just to be me.
I've gotten so upset about this,
but if we no longer are together, it's you I'm going to miss.
Author notes
Written November 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- Many many many options!!! by GuardianPhoenix7289.
700 points, ended December 4, 2006, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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And how right you are!!!! Not many people will even try to write their feelings down like this. I know I have some, but just don't post them. I write from the heart. Always have and always wil. You did a great job on this one. Keep that pen flowing.
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Very Beautiful!
Well done hun, you've writtent he truth very nicely and openly. Your emotins are clear and so is the flow of the poem. Simple & yet says a lot..It's the issue lot of us can relate to. Very nice. Keep up the good work! -
wow. thats all i can say. now that i know that this is abt matt...it gives it a whole new meaning. im not quite sure wat to say. geez im out of words. ill messege u when i think of somehing.
buh bye
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hey this was really good! u did a good job! keep it up
luv ya like a sis
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thaks, but i'm new..... whats an option number???
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Hmm, please please, (you are not the first person I am telling this to so don't feel guilty), put your option number in your Author's Comments spot please!
As for the poem, it definitely told me of how a girl feels about her relationship with this guy, perhaps the girl is you? I liked this one, fairly good rhyming, just don't work too hard to make it rhyme. But still, very good, saddening, pretty good explanation as to how the girl is feeling. Good job! And good luck in my contest!!!
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