Kahrat I miss you
All the time
Hope you will understand
Reasons why
After I left you
The tears that I cry
Inside me you live
More then you will know
I visit you sometimes
Stumble into your life again
See you are telling me
Yet letting me know
Our pact is bleeding
Under this missing
Hope keeps me going
Eventually you enter my life again
Accepting me for me
Proud to have you
Sadness turning into happiness
Kahrat I miss you heaps
Author notes
This is the 100 th poem I wrote here, still missing my doggie that's living with my X hb....there is no chance he will ever let me have my dog back again...so sometimes I just cry.....
1/ Write about your pet in ACROSTIC form
Written November 8th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Members of Partners In Crime by Partners In Crime.
300 points, ended November 15, 2006, 2 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 100 th GROUP CONTEST; by Dove by Partners In Crime.
900 points, ended April 12, 2008, 126 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Still missing my doggie...a divorce always brings losses....
Comments
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I know how you feel in this poignant poem. Having lost our beloved dog, Koby, I totally understand your sadness, even though your precious Kahrat still lives. I wish you'd be able to get him back... maybe... we never know.
good luck in the contest
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A good pet brings something special to your life, its like a best friend that accepts and loves everything about you. I'm sorry you cant live with him anymore. I hope at least that your ex is taking good care of him
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missing a pet is hard. I hope you get to see him sometimes.
He looks like a special dog. Good luck in the contest
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I know how you must feel, having to give up such a special pet. It hurts. You've written a wonderful acrostic and expressing feelings not often found in the acrostic form. A beautiful dedication to Kahrat
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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Aw, what a wonderful acrostic. That dog is so beautiful.
You honored him really well with this piece here.
I know sometimes animals can be your bestfriend....
maybe a fimilar will come since he can't be with you.
Kari
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Missing a pet lasts for a long time. I still miss my Lady (Shelty Collie) from years and years ago. I hope the aching eases soon. Thank you for entering and best wishes
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A nice poem for a nice looking animal. Good luck in the contest
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No problem darling!!!
He's a beautiful wolf dog!!!
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Sorry for the late respons
..yes it's a wolfdog
very shy but to me he is just my mate
I only have to mis him now for living somewhere else
But maybe he will come to me then in a few months from now...I hope
Thnxs for your nice comment
XXJeannette
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Aw. This is so sad, but nicely said. A beautiful picture attached. Good luck.
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awe souch a touching poem and beautiful dog....i can understand the emotion in this poem, Kaiser is my beautiful baby boy, i cant imagine ever giving him up.
good luck in the contest
Tasha -
A beautiful doggie and poem Best wishes in the contest
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Very good, Acrostic poem and about your lovily dog. It is a pain to see a loved dog, when it is not there. my friend has to go through the same thing. and it's not the best just when she moves on.
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Good Luck
I am so sorry you had to go through that, he looks like he is a very beautiful dog in the pic above. This is a very touching and sad piece. Good luck to you in this contest.
Keep writing
Countrybabe 
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Oh Tes..that must be hard..loosing your doggies like that, and puppies too ...I know I still can see mine so....
Thnxs for coming by to read this
XXJeannette
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Oh Hun...
I really loved this...It reminded me of my two dogs I had a few years ago...They were called Shakira & Tequila...I so loved them to bits...Then Shakira fell pregnant and she got bitten by a tick and got tick bite fever which caused her to pass away with all my puppies...Then my biggest heartbreak was Tequila...He got bitten by a snake and died...I still miss them very much and always look for where they use to be...
Thanks for sharing hun...Good luck in the contest
Love ya
Tes
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excellent presentation
Awwww.........this is such a beautiful poem about missing your doggy.
He is very handsome too!
It is sad that you don't get to see him more often. I hope he can eventually live with you again.
Good luck in the contest Jeannette.
Ethereal Melody
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I forgot to mention that the picture you have taken of Kahrat is perfect, he is a beautiful dog
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A beautiful but sad piece, leaving your pet behind is the hardest thing to do sometimes we just wish they would understand the reasons. Great acrostic Jeannette.
Thanks for entering and goodluck
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Ouch, this is deep and hurtful. I don't know what happened exactly, but I know how close you can get to an animal and how hard it is to be without them. I can only say I am sorry that you have to go through it and I hope time, or whatever it is that eases pain, will ease yours soon. Thinking of you...
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Aww that's so cute beautiful wolf/dog? fabulous and sad!
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