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Hang onto me.....

Save me, oh my God
I'm almost dead
My strength here dangles
Now by a thread

Struggling to keep sight
Of why I live
Desperate to figure
Just why I give

My friends their leaving
Now right and left
As Satan attempts
His moral threat

So hard to see past
My inner mess
Fighting to control
This mental stress

Fearing the bite
Of condemnation
Their crueless claws
Mortification

Hold me, I need You
Oh, hear my plea
I'm vulnerable
Be there for me

Please hang onto me
Don’t let me go
And through these testings
Help me to grow

You said that broken
Can I be used
I beg for the strength
That will not lose

Then cover my mind
Surround my thoughts
Carved into a tool
To reach the lost

Author notes

Please forgive if this one might be confusing…but this poem depicts all I am going through right now…..which is a lot, so it’s not describing just one thing….
Written November 7th, 2006

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  • RIP Whoever
    February 13, 2007
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  • jjbreunig3
    December 27, 2006

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    A beautiful write...

    A beautiful write; we all have trials to go through; keep your Faith at the forefront; you will make it with His strength; nicely done. Perhaps you would enjoy my poem called "Lasting Hope".


  • Tabitha-Robin
    December 4, 2006
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    Fabulous. I love this write. So deep and spiritual. God has really blessed you with talent.


  • Teddibly Abnormal
    November 22, 2006

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    *hug*

    Then cover her mind lord
    surround her thoughts
    carve her into a tool
    to reach the searching lost


    xox i'm praying for you.
    awesomely penned

  • Chalina-Rivers
    November 8, 2006
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    thank you....I know He will...there is always a light at the end of the tunnel


  • line shakes
    November 7, 2006
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    god the ultimate source of hope, love and security. i just wanna tell that im going through hell here...im jobless and broke..but i believe he will save me and he will save you too. whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. He will give you the strength..he will...i can gurantee you. nice write...it brings hope and courage.

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