Save me, oh my God
I'm almost dead
My strength here dangles
Now by a thread
Struggling to keep sight
Of why I live
Desperate to figure
Just why I give
My friends their leaving
Now right and left
As Satan attempts
His moral threat
So hard to see past
My inner mess
Fighting to control
This mental stress
Fearing the bite
Of condemnation
Their crueless claws
Mortification
Hold me, I need You
Oh, hear my plea
I'm vulnerable
Be there for me
Please hang onto me
Don’t let me go
And through these testings
Help me to grow
You said that broken
Can I be used
I beg for the strength
That will not lose
Then cover my mind
Surround my thoughts
Carved into a tool
To reach the lost
I'm almost dead
My strength here dangles
Now by a thread
Struggling to keep sight
Of why I live
Desperate to figure
Just why I give
My friends their leaving
Now right and left
As Satan attempts
His moral threat
So hard to see past
My inner mess
Fighting to control
This mental stress
Fearing the bite
Of condemnation
Their crueless claws
Mortification
Hold me, I need You
Oh, hear my plea
I'm vulnerable
Be there for me
Please hang onto me
Don’t let me go
And through these testings
Help me to grow
You said that broken
Can I be used
I beg for the strength
That will not lose
Then cover my mind
Surround my thoughts
Carved into a tool
To reach the lost
Author notes
Please forgive if this one might be confusing…but this poem depicts all I am going through right now…..which is a lot, so it’s not describing just one thing….
Written November 7th, 2006
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A beautiful write...
A beautiful write; we all have trials to go through; keep your Faith at the forefront; you will make it with His strength; nicely done. Perhaps you would enjoy my poem called "Lasting Hope".
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Fabulous. I love this write. So deep and spiritual. God has really blessed you with talent.
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thank you...so much :)...it's only Him!!
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*hug*
Then cover her mind lord
surround her thoughts
carve her into a tool
to reach the searching lost
xox i'm praying for you.
awesomely penned
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thank you....I know He will...there is always a light at the end of the tunnel
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god the ultimate source of hope, love and security. i just wanna tell that im going through hell here...im jobless and broke..but i believe he will save me and he will save you too. whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. He will give you the strength..he will...i can gurantee you. nice write...it brings hope and courage.
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