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Lead Me To My Core

I'm gonna keep going under
Like you said I did
But it's not my fault
You did it
You killed me
Right from the inside

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Written on 5th May 2003 at 04:12 GMT

And that is the last of my 19 poems written between 02:12 and 04:12 GMT.

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  • Sabur Mukhtar
    May 5, 2003
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    thEy giRLs fRom eYElanD wiTh niCe vioLIns
    yeS?

  • Mdeeterz
    May 5, 2003
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    Wow you wrote 12 poems in 2 hours? I'm amazed, I could never do that. I like this poem, short but to the point! ~mimi~