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Simplicity In Sight

Writing in my sleep
Catch me before I fall
Victim of your charms again
Keep watch
I may steal your heart again
For you are weak just like me

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Written on 5th May 2003 at 04:05 GMT

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  • DefinitiveFreak silver member
    December 14, 2004
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    Yes, I shall consider that. Thanx Annastacia.

  • 1elephant
    December 14, 2004
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    its short but it made me think a lot


  • Annastacia
    December 14, 2004
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    This iis interesting. Not that you asked, but if it were me I would pull the second "again" and replace it with once more.
    Anna

  • WelshMafia
    December 14, 2004
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    I like the beat of the poem.