Won’t you come back here? Please, please, why
Won’t you come back? I try so hard and you
Won’t even take the time to notice, and you
Won’t listen to me. Please, please, why
Won’t you listen? Why
Won’t you love me? Why
Won’t you? I hate the answer. You
Won’t need to tell me why you
Won’t love me, because I already know why: because you
Won’t.
Author notes
Purple monkeys fly at night.
I chose option eight, obviously using the word "won't" at the beginning of every line.
A very simple poem. Don't interpret it simply.
I like the word won't because it sounds terrible. Because it is a contraction.
Written November 7th, 2006
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Thise is very sweet and it is not simple at all because I feel these lines right now. Thank You and Good Luck. eyes water pfft. lol. God Bless, With Love, Jo
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