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I'm Not Lonely (I'm just alone)

Are you wondering why I wear black
Why, When you call my name I don't turn back

I'm not lonely I'm just alone
Don't go thinking that
Cuz in the end I'm better off on my own

I'm not a lunatic psychotic
sitting on my own throwing a fit
staring at me ain't gonna help
GET OVER IT

Broken hearted and Cold souled
Life ain't worth livin'
You're getting too old
You say I'm an open book
You haven't seen anything yet
Go take a look

I'm not lonely I'm just alone
Don't go thinking that
Cuz in the end I'm better off on my own
Yeah, I'm a lunatic, a psychotic
Crying myself to sleep

But at least I'm not lonely
I'm just alone

Are you wondering why I wear black
Why, When you call my name I don't turn back

I'm not lonely I'm just alone
Don't go thinking that
Cuz in the end I'm better off on my own
Just a freak of nature
Waiting for the end

When you call my name I never turn ba--ck
I'm not lonely I'm just alone
In the end I'm still not better off on my own

Author notes

i think i fell in love. but he's in love with someone else. so please give me critical feedback.
Written November 7th, 2006

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  • pimp daddy satin
    March 24, 2007
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  • m0narch
    November 9, 2006
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    Woah, the first 2 parts say a lot!
    They say something so perfectly, that I identified with them immediately. You've taken so many clichés and so many labels and turned them into 5 lines that say A LOT - A hard thing to do! I love it! I would very much like to see it finished with the same sentiment as the first 5 lines running through the whole lyric.
    Great job.
    M
    Edited on Nov 09 because 'Forgot to mention something!'.