Our first time
We are finally alone and you draw nearer to me
I feel my heartbeats quicken
to a pace they've never been
Your eyes locked with mine
and i feel the anxiety build
The rhythm says i want this...
i want you...i need.....
You are so close i can smell your energy
and almost touch you
Just before we touch it flows through the air,
a spark between us both that charges the
few millimeters of space inbetween.
we touch and stay in each others arms
Holding each other tightly
and thats the place I want to be
with you....alone..in an infinite time continuum
There is a stirring inside
of exuberance and sparks fly
when the luschious folds intermesh and move over each other
Ever so softly they part now and then
for me to see through the windows of your soul
So dark they seem
I can get lost in the pool of questions
those eyes are asking me
The warmth in my chest
moves throughout my body
and I know you feel it too.
Author notes
Written November 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- Am i ready? by Icry4YOU2mrow.
750 points, ended January 18, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I want to Feel The Fiery Passion by EternalFyre.
450 points, ended February 20, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Drown me with romance! by The Vulture.
540 points, ended February 1, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell Me How It Is! by Luna Darling.
505 points, ended April 2, 2007, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The poem was great, I noticed a few confusing points, but otherwise a good write. The picture is amazing, but it destracted me slightly from the poem.
Good luck in the contests!
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First I really liked the background, second this poem was really well written. Loved it, good luck in the contest!
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Thanks.
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yummy...lol the background is adorable but please consider changing it because the poem is really really realy hard to read.
I love how to stir a bit of science in the second stanza... definitely a lot of chemistry throughout the whole poem. =) Great job, I really felt it!
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Cool thanks....made an adjsutment to the colour of the font.....hopefully this is better.
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awwwwwwww
I LOVE!!!!!!!! thanks 4 entering & following my stupid simple rules lol. ok
xox
ceci
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It was a lovely contest idea!
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Aw thnx. yeah it was an idea. but well now the ideas out the window. dont have to i guess worry about it any more. My bf doesnt want to see me like "that" until i have a ring on my finger...& well im only 16...oh well ive done fine 4 16 years i guess i can go a couple more. Im just glad hes the one i love.
xox
ceci
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