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My Power

You can’t give away power,

Nor is it something to take.

If you feel like a child,

Perhaps that’s your own mistake.


If you feel helpless and weak,

If you feel somewhat confused,

Seek answers within you.

You aren’t being abused.


Everyone feels small sometimes,

Even when they are grown.

We all bend when we must.

We all reap what is sown.


I see through you like glass,

‘Cause I’ve been here before.

I cannot set you free,

Though I want nothing more.


I would never hold you back.

I want your dreams to come true.

Hopeless and hopeful both,

Reside deep within you.


I don’t want you shut up.

You impose that on me.

Your silence ... your refusals

Defeat my abilities.


I have never shut you out.

I am right here with you.

The walls keeping you in

Are keeping me out too.


You feel stupid without me.

You’ve sworn that I can’t change

The ‘truth’ in perception

That I can’t rearrange.


Your intelligence is bound,

Only by chains of your fears.

I’m not everyone else.

Reading that brought me tears.


You have never been lesser.

You’ve never known me to hate.

No one can be perfect.

Please, don’t say it’s too late.


Your beauty is amazing,

Both within and without you.

You can’t mean to compare

Anything that I do,


With the treatment you suffered

While you were in that mans care.

I need you to know that

Our love is far too rare,


To keep wand’ring cross purpose,

Avoiding all hard topics,

Not talking over things,

Not using our logic.


It has hurt me more than I

Could ever possibly say,

Implying I try to

Hurt you in any way.


When you’re ready to talk,

You know right where I am.

I am always here waiting.

Come back to me if you can.

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Written November 7th, 2006

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  • Smirnoff Ice
    November 8, 2006
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    A very powerful personal piece full of emotion.Hope it helped writing this and i hope you sort things out soon.


  • Gone2007
    November 7, 2006
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    My poem was never ment to hurt you and wasn't ment for you to read. I was writing not implying anything or trying to. I can say I'm sorry but i know and agree thats just not enough. I have so much to say but none that are not excusses. I don't know what happened or how to fix it.

  • Revwilliamfoos
    November 7, 2006
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    wow you are an ancient spirit with words like that... i truly that that was amazing keep doing well
    love the papa


  • Nerosbane
    November 7, 2006
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    I LOVE THIS POEM!! It has stunned me into silence. But .. I still love it.


  • Reggie D
    November 7, 2006
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    that power should be spread all over the world

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