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Leave

Go away
Get out of my life
You're not wanted here
You did what you came to do
So go
Turn away from it all
Leave me behind
I'm too good for you
I'm better off without you
You failed to please me
On too many occasions
I should have shot you then
But I gave you chance after chance
You charmed me
Paralysed me
If you don't leave
Then I will
I shall be the ignorant one
My life will be in my hands
My fate and destiny not controlled by you
You have no hold over me
So leave me to my life
And get over your own

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Written on 5th May 2003 at 03:26 GMT

About an ex of mine. Damn him to... somewhere.

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  • xdying-angelx
    July 14, 2005
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    Great write, I love the message in this poem. That one or the other of you need to get over it and move on because your better off with him. Well done and keep up the good work

    x Chloe x


  • afireinside00
    November 8, 2004
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    i agree with the previous comment. great work


  • Nam
    November 2, 2004
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    it's always the way that life seems to be when it's about someone that we are willing to kill over or be killed in the process .. it is 'ignorance' as you state, but perhaps more so in that angsty arena than anything. the heartbreak that seems to always be broken even when we feel that we've moved on.