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life...

a tear is just a tear,
until it falls.
From the heart,
unable to hear.

Unable to live
with this pain
The name calling
has drove me insane

Don't bother to pretend
to care
in the end
you will win

with this one last breath
i take from my lungs
i tie the rope
and leave my black heart to be hung.

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Written November 7th, 2006

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