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*Rough Draft*

Come sit next to me
And I'll tell you a story
A story about a girl
Broken inside and out
No visible beauty
Because no one cared enough
To scratch the surface -they were to busy
She's lost in a sea of ordinary faces
And ordinary souls
Belonging to anyone who would listen
Belonging to nobody
Because nobody would

Author notes

It's something I'm working on. I haven't written anything desent in a while. Ho hum.
Written November 7th, 2006

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  • xXxThat GurlxXx
    November 7, 2006
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    Acadia~
    Hey! This is a good piece so far. I am sure the rest of it will be amazing. Keep on writing and I hope to see some more of your work again.
    ~!~Manda~!~