There was a young kitten called Mew,
Who wanted a way to please you,
Went out in the night,
And to her delight,
Soon caught you a lovely fresh shrew.
Author notes
because cats are weird in the way they seem to think you want them to bring you dead mice/shrews/ a pidgeons or two. hope u like it
Written November 7th, 2006
sahort form; limerick
A contest entry
- My First Contest : For Poets Less Than 10 Trophies by Kessie.
300 points, ended November 9, 2006, 25 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fascinating Felines-- Poems About Cats- Prewrites Allowed by Mercury Rising.
1000 points, ended May 11, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Very funny and so true. Cats are always proud, and rather perplexed when you fail to appreciate their dead mouse gifts. Woman can be like that to, though I've never brought one a decaying shrew. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.
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Awe this is cute and gave me a chuckle
Great entry in the contest thank you for entering
delila
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Awww...
This is a wonderful poem. And i DO SO love cats..especially Kittens. HOWEVER, this poem does not meet the minimum line requirements and I will have to remove it from the contest. SORRY. (If you hurry, you can get one in that meets the requirements
) Great write and thanks for your entry
~Ray~
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Thanks for this cute little limerick, maybe-Im-amazed.
kessie -
This is so cute. Love the limerick and how true this is. Cats though have servants in their owners and get away with most of what they do. Loved this - it made me smile.
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