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The City of Broken Dreams and Broken Glass

In the city of broken dreams and broken glass
The good and bad times never last
Here people die and no one cries
Love and heartbreak are on the rise
Mirrors break and people laugh
In the city of broken dreams and broken glass

The streets are made of torn up love letters
They all say i will love you forever
Misery is every single person's best freind
It is the only freindship that will never end

You will get a career if you overdose
The city mayor has done it the most
Little children are taught their destiny
To become the world's worst enemy

In the city of broken dreams and broken glass
The good and bad times never last
Here people die and no one cries
Love and heartbreak are on the rise
Mirrors break and people laugh
In the city of broken dreams and broken glass

The most abused are turned to stone
So their terrible horror is never known
The summer sun suddenly becomes cold
And all the youth becomes the old

Faith goes in and out of fashion
But that never stops people's passion
The long term bad was once the better
It's the only chance it can last forever

In the city of broken dreams and broken glass
The good and bad times never last
Here people die and no one cries
Love and heartbreak are on the rise
Mirrors break and people laugh
In the city of broken dreams and broken glass

All the dreams have turned to dust
And all the glass begins to rust
So the whole city adopts a disguise
To hide it away from unknown eyes

In the city of broken dreams and broken glass
The good and bad times never last
Here people die and no one cries
Love and heartbreak are on the rise
Mirrors break and people laugh
In the city of broken dreams and broken glass

Author notes

This is a song i wrote that i quite like so i hope you like it too.
Written November 7th, 2006

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  • Envelope
    May 23, 2007

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    i enjoyed this, it was creative... and fleshed out by rhythm and melody, not a fan of the song structure, nothing against your work just in general, still the great rhyme scheme salvage a nice piece of art

  • StonerChica
    November 13, 2006
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    damn this was an awesome poem, i loved the rhyme and content. i will definately read more of your work. two stoner thumbs up!!