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I Just Cant Tell You

I just can't tell you how I feel,
I love you so much,
Why can't I believe this is still real,
I love the way you smile at me,
I love the way you laugh,
I love the way you pick me up when I'm down.

I just can't tell you,
How I really feel,
I don't want us to be just friends anymore,
I want us to be REAL,

I love you for now,
And always forever,
You are always in my heart.
Even If I just can't tell you.

One day I will let you know,
Which way I want us to go,
I'm so interested to hear you say,
I love you as well let's go all the way,

But until that day comes,
I'm happy just to be friends,
I just can't tell you yet,
But I will be able to one day.

Author notes

My minds all over the place atm, i really like this gurl atm, but jus cant tell her how i really feel, it sux
Written November 7th, 2006

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  • DonnasGuy
    November 25, 2006
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    whos dat for? its good


  • Reiga
    November 7, 2006
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    Sweet

    Hey, I know how it feels. I'm in the same situation only I've told him a million times...and yet I'm too shy to ask him if he does know(I told him discreetly). Chances are he does, we've been hanging out so much lately and yeah plus even though I may say he's clueless, he knows I like him, I just have a strong feeling he's waiting for me to say something. Yet it's kind of scary to go from being friends to lovers all of a sudden. I love him very much hey I even wrote a poem about him(For Your Eyes Only) Very beautiful poem, I really did enjoy reading it. It did leave quite an impact on me, great job!


  • xXxThat GurlxXx
    November 7, 2006
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    Veosoco~
    Hey! I thought that this was a really good write. Keep on writing and I hope to come across some more of your poems soon.
    ~!~Manda~!~