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The rain washes her troubles away

The rain washes her troubles away
The wind carries them to another
She cries and laughs
She jumps with joy and shouts with anger
The pain she feels inside
The troubles lingering there
On going suffering
Split by fake happiness
Divided by sadness
Her feelings are waterfalls
Calm and serene
In a flash turned to white fury
Taking her under
And holding her hostage
Lifeless and pale

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Written November 6th, 2006

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