Distant whispers,
echo empty nights.
Miles between us.
Can you hear me?
This love I feel,
knows neither time nor space.
My heart,
wrapped in thoughts of you.
Only you...
Cold sheets twine my soul,
waiting.
Waiting for your warmth
to fill me.
In dreams,
day or night,
I long for your touch,
your presence.
To wake to you as reality.
Because,
in love, in life...
I need you now!
Author notes
Title per Firehouse.
Written November 6th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- I Need You Now by Heavenly Angel.
300 points, ended November 12, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Good write!
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LOL,that's funny, we posted at the same time that the other was a better thought. Thank you for the comments, but your write is excellent.
Storm -
great
Great poem storm, makes me wonder is I should have stayed out of this contest after reading your awesome write, great job, I loved the rthym and the flow, John -
Thank you Melissa, appreciate it.
Storm -
Thank you for the comments, so very appreciated.
Storm -
BEAUTIFUL!!!
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brilliant
well i have only one thing to say BOOKMARKING....
goodluck in the contest.thank you for the post and such a beautiful read.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment, appreciate it.
Storm -
Thank you for your much appreciated comments.
Storm -
Thank you for reading and commenting, appreciate it.
Storm -
Thank you so much for commenting.
Storm -
Thank you for the kind comments, much appreciated.
Storm -
Serene and in love
StormGoddess, always a treat to read you
I can relate too.. love is such a powerful bond of healing and fulfillment! Thanks to my poet Lamartine, he is my one and only inspiration! These lines pay tribute to him -
Because,
in love, in life...
I need you now
Very exquisitely and beautifully written. Terima kasih. Berjuta-juta pelukan.. masa depannya terjamin.... avec tout mon amour xx
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wonderful poem,
filled with such love and honesty.
i hope you get the love you deserve
and dream of.
hugs
candy -
Beautiful
WOW...Very nice Storm, Yeah I miss my girl at a distance and over time. -
Just absolutely beautiful in every way....flowed perfectly....written to perfection....enjoyed the read...Smiles, Terry
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This peice is absolutley beautiful! It is so warm and comes from the heart. Makes one smile while they read this. Great job with this. Best of luck to you in the contest. All4hugs
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Thank you for the kind comment, greatly appreciated.
Storm -
Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
Storm -
Thank you for commenting, much appreciated.
Storm -
A Masterpiece at last!!
Sweet and loving. Like an embracing kiss that is longing for another night to be held so close. This is aww so warming to the heart. I love the way you just wrote from your heart as it echoed into the peaceful surroundings of love.
**You have marvelled me**
I guess it was time for the other storm to comment lol
Stormi
Marianne
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Awww...that's so pretty, sweet, and romantic...I love it...
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this poem truly touched me.
you have this spirit in you that only you possess...and it was a very sweet poem with a lot of tenderness. -
Thank you Sandy. The words were there instantly, just poured out.
Storm -
Thank you Adrian, appreciate it. I am sure there are a few who can relate.
Storm -
This is a great poem Storm and I'm sure I'm not the only one that relates to it. You put it so well
Adrian -
Awww sweet Storm, I knew I could count on you to come up with such a beautifully wonderful and loving piece! Sigh....
I sure miss my love....soooo much
I could relate to this piece in every way! Awesome..thank you!
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