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November Rain

Night drifts up as thunder rolls in,
One spark of lightning, touches his skin.
Vibrations announce her approaching fast,
Explosive, she appears to him, at last.
Mystical, to feel lip's gentle touch,
Bodies twine with tempting brush.
Energy bounds from her soul to his,
Racing hearts of heaven's bliss.

Rain's sweet dew of stormy skies,
Anticipating through orgasmic sighs.
Immersed in lust of sensual tease,
November rains of passion seized.

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Written November 6th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 7, 2006
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    Thank you, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • November 7, 2006
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    awesome poem and nice background...
    SNOW QUEEN

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 7, 2006
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    Thank you Adrian, I appreciate it.

    Storm

  • WarrioroftheHeart
    November 6, 2006
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    Beautiful and sensual, great write
    Adrian

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 6, 2006
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    Thank you for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate it.

    Storm

  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    November 6, 2006
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    Wow! I am completely amazed and in awe of this one. Such a beautiful write. Thank you for sharing.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 6, 2006
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    Thank you so much Sandy, appreciate your words.

    Storm

  • Heavenly Angel
    November 6, 2006
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    I loved this one, Storm! Beautifully, beautifully done!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 6, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment, much appreciated.

    Storm
  • dust.x
    November 6, 2006
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    whoa I really felt that
    such a moving poem
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