I'm going to the CIRCUS today
To see the CLOWNS and have some fun
I always loved the BIG RED noses
Kinda like when you are out on a cold DAY
Then that turns to NIGHT
And the STARS come out
Wonder how cold it gets in HOLLYWOOD
With all those FANCY people
I guess most could be SNOBS
But I will never go to be around the UGLIES
Cause they are all so FAKE
Kinda like the Hollywood SETS
Like a three ring CIRCUS
Think I'll STICK with that!!
Author notes
Written November 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Spring Board poems by frog hugger.
300 points, ended November 6, 2006, 14 entries
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Cute poem my friend. Never read this style of poetry before, I went back into the contest description to find out what it was all about. I must say you did a great job. Funny what words our minds come up with when we let it loose.
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a good poem penned, the madcap life of some in the world, hollywood snobs, rich and smiling, they should give us all £50 each for making them famous!
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Haha! This took me here, there and everywhere with the images! Circus, nighttime with stars, Hollywood snobs.
"... the uglies" made me laugh. 
And now that I read this, I looked down below and realize I already read it... HAHAHA! I laugh at myself.
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I'll have to look into the spring board poetry! Sounds like fun! Hmmm... cute little write. Kimberly G.
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I like your new style. I don't think it something I could do though. But you never know maybe someday I will give it a try. ..You did a great job enjoyed the Circus.
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Wonderful!
Good to see ya posting, you are silly ya know that don't ya?
but how cute the poem is. I like your little diddy. 
Keep on penning on my sweet friend.
All the best! 
-Timothy
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