One
In one second, your life could end
In one moment, this world could make sense
In one blink, your life could pass you by
In one step, a mountain you could climb
in one truth, all knowledge is found
In one tear, all your pain is unbound
In one kiss, your body aches for more
In one touch, you feel your heart soar
In one breath, a new life can begin
In one smile, an inkling of hope transcends
In one prayer, and single gift gives rise
In one look into your child's eyes, your one reason for living resides
Author notes
purple monkeys fly at night
Written November 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Wow Me With One Word. = ) = by Anjole-Of-The-Artz.
500 points, ended November 10, 2006, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I'm not really a sucker for these types of things, so I wasn't completely drawn in... But, this was a very interesting write. I enjoyed it, and it seemed very well done.
Good write
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How wonderful true. In something as small as ONE a life can change. I love the ending for that is how I felt the moment my son was born. My whole world changed to never be the same. I would not give it back for anything.
Beauty in truth.
Best to you, sweet poet!
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I really like this poem. Very well written... very true. In a blink of an eye so much can be missed as well. I almost missed this... almost. Thanks, Kj
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One.
I want to cry. These poems keep reminding me of how I feel. <3 Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. God Bless, With Love, Jolie -
Yes, a moment could change everything. i am glad you liked it. Take care.
Rayne -
you are right, one is the beginning and everything else stems from it. Thank you for your kind words.
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Thank you for commenting on my work. I am glad you liked it.
Rayne -
i like this.
a lot.
it's so true.
so much could happen in one moment.... -
true, in one moment for it all and one moment to lose it all. we only have one life to live so live that life in your one moments.
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a good poem, i think the repetition works fine here. i wish that you have good luck in this contest you have entered. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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One is the beginning and you have started these lines with that word, interesting ones yiou have penned here. Easy to read and understand.
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wow! I really enjoyed reading it!
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Wonderful piece filled with truth. I loved the formand flow and the rhyme is very well done. your thoughts are clear and well expressed. Great work, keep your pen forever flowing!
Bunny
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