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Im dead, you just dont know it yet

I'm going to die
in the literal sense,
thanks for being so selfish.

I'm dying,
in the emotional sense,
thank you for not caring.

You have taken everything within me,
torn it up and thrown it away,
then left me with nothing.
Thanks for never asking the truth, but believing what you hear.

Fuck you for killing me,
Fuck you for never calling,
I don't want to hear from you again,
because I am dying soon anyway.

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Its not something I wish to explain to anyone.
Written November 6th, 2006

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  • BeautifulKyrptonite
    November 13, 2006
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    I thank you.

  • Maingie Luupi-n-ine
    November 12, 2006
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    Head Heeld Hie

    Watt can1
    do but
    ap'lord?

  • BeautifulKyrptonite
    November 8, 2006
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    Thanks Gina. I love you too

  • BeautifulKyrptonite
    November 8, 2006
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    Thanks Lacey I really appreciate it.


  • Forgotten Warrior
    November 7, 2006
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    Wow Donna full of emotion I really like this poem and sorry i havent called you latley ive been super busy but i'll call you tomorrow i promise and i really wonder wat made you think of such a heart wrenching poem its really good much loves jewell

  • HopelessDreamer2010
    November 6, 2006
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    Donna. If this is about who I think i will beat the living shit out of him. You are too good of a person to even be wasting ur time being upset about him. Dont explain I probably already know....if you EVER want to talk you CAN talk to me at school...yes i will talk... im sorry that ur going through another hard time but trust me i know that you will bounce back...i know we havent talked in a while but i still do think ur an awesome person...
    love always
    Lacey


  • dead soul
    November 6, 2006
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    awww hun it will be ok i mean look at me for example seriously you saw what happened to me with matt and look at me now!!! i mean you know what im saying things will get better i promise!! i love you sooo much
    Gina

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