On and on this hell goes
unless I dare to stop it now
tonight is when all pain ends.
On my bed I sit one last time
finding a place to leave this behind
Concentrating on what comes now.
Over and over the blade cuts
trembling, i watch my crimson life
roll down my deeply scarred arms.
Breathing deep, i know there is no way out
I relinquish my life
Now ready to accept death.
There is no fear in what i leave behind
Only peace in the hope that, in death,
i shall finally find tranquility.
It is time for me to go
Forever i close my emerald eyes
slipping into my eternal everlasting sleep.
Author notes
I decided to go along with the Option having to do with a time when i attempted to commit suicide. If i had this is the exact way i would've done it.
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- Pain by weirdsis amz.
450 points, ended January 8, 2007, 46 entries
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this is a good piece...so are you ready die now????joke...you are a good poet
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i didnt like it. i loved it.
it paints a very vivid picture. and i understand exactly where you're coming from. -
A good poem.. "On my bed I sit one last time
finding a place to leave this behind" A great way to express sadness..
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