"one tear falls for happiness"
at her wedding I cried
for she truly smiled
"one tear falls for sadness"
thinking of how lonely it
would be without her
"one tear falls for love"
.. the one person I wish would see me
as a great person , doesn't ,
every one else does
"one tear falls for you "
a tear for all of my friends ,
the ones who have shown me
I'm a better person
then I see my self to be
each tear 1/4 my soul
each tear 1/4 of me
each tear is for you
Author notes
Written November 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Passionate emotional love poem by Aurielle.
300 points, ended January 17, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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memories
another great that i remember you reading to me on the phone and reading in your wonderful book...i believe i remember who this poem was about and what a shame if it is cos that person no longer is a good friend to anyone...but you tried your best to be a good friend even though she was cold to a lot of us...you are a good friend and sometimes don't know what to do...look deep into your heart, listen closely, you'll know what's needed to be done even if it's a very hard thing to do...even though it was a dumb idea in my opinion, it was still good for you to try to continue to be a good friend to this person...try to find who you once were, my friend...my dearest best friend
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A powerful poem that has a lot of emotion coming through, it seeps through the words and off the page. Very well done.
Great poem yet again.
Em
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awsome
wow that was really good i liked it alot. you could tell there was alot of feeling involved.
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Well done
This is such a beautiful Poem..
Its Powerful and it has real emotion..
You're a talented writter,
And i llok forward to reading more from you..
well done
Nashlea -
awww
Yet another great poem. You are a very talented writter, don't ever stop. -
Sweet
Aww...Brent, that's so sweet...It really is a sweet poem, and I like it alot.
Is it a true story?
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