The last day I saw you smile
Maybe it’s what made the pain worthwhile
Time seems like forever
I don’t remember a time you loved me,
Ever
I see the darkness that was caught in your empty eyes
I’m nothing but a bleak shadow in your life
Despite the abuse
I could still say I Loved you
I wish you could see me
I’m just another ghost outside your window
You engraved your name inside my heart
I needed your bittersweet light
I waited for you to feel alive
I waited to see if you cared at all
You held my heart and let it fall
Frozen angel that can’t cry
Your self-mutilation won’t let you fly
Cold and Lonely
With tattered dreams of gray
Rusted keys
Belong to a heart
That fell apart and decayed
Author notes
Love..isn't about one person, you should be loved back in a relationship, and it isn't about saying the words, it's through actions and the way that person makes you feel. I was listening to Hawthorne Heights trying to get back in the swing of my old tone, needless to say it worked 
and I'm in Love, I feel Loved, and I Love jacob 
he's my heart, my partner and my best friend, I couldn't be more blessed 
Ruth Please leave a comment
Written November 5th, 2006
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hey this is so awesome! really great job, i love this. sad yes but i can tell theres a lot of meaning behind it.
merry christmas!
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Well I agree that u should be loved back in a relationship. Good write here and keep it up!!
I never get anyone tell me to read one of there's before they read mine but I always read and comment even if they don't but good job on this one -
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Thank-you, I'll add you to my favorites so I won't forget to comment, but school is busy so sometimes it gets hard, thank-you again Ruth
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Thank-You so much for your comment, I enjoy reading constructive criticism, so much has changed ina really good way, I hope it goes the same for you, it's great to be back on AP Ruth
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Thank-You for the comment, it is appreciated Ruth
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Thank-You for your comment Ruth
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hey hun..ur right..love isn't one sided..it goes both ways..the last time we talked and read eachother's stuff it was the other way around..you were hurting and i was in love..well i'm still in love but he's gone..i don't know what he's doin..playing games is about all..if you read my stuff you'll understand...
This was really really sweet and heart felt..i loved it..i loved how you said that his name is engraved in your heart..and the part about a ghost outside his window..those are some awesome lines lady..like swweeet..lol...i loved this pome as a whole..great job hun
I hope that everything works out for you..
lottsa love
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awww
aww . if i were to ever see a beautiful sad poem .. it would of have t obe this one .. manny times have i felt this way very nice keep it up cassi -
wow, I like it. I like how you worded it.
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