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Nene

A strong woman with her back to the world and her eyes to the sky.
A distant healer of those in pain, she cast a cold glance toward them.
Her magic all ready doing its work on their broken dreams and bodies.
She wishes to fly away from this place to a different world.
A place where she can be a start and have all her dead dream revived.
She keeps her eyes locked on the sky wishing reality to fade, but all
too soon she hears the sound that calls her back
to her silent healing of the world.

Author notes

Hello everyone, This is my first poem here. I hope you enjoy it. It is deicated to my maternal grandmother
Written November 5th, 2006

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  • AutumnCherry
    November 9, 2006
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    this is very pretty and makes me think. beautiful ^^


  • eriedragon
    November 8, 2006
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    very mysterious, ilove it