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Mistress of Storms

Mysterious, she crawls across the night,
Igniting sparks with her stormy light.
Sensual caress, a gentle breeze,
Touches so soft, to fall to his knees.
Rumbling starts as the thunder rolls,
Enrapturing him in seductive control.
Stormy Weather, in thought, to remember,
Smiling, recalling The Morning After.

One flick of passion, through his soul, flies,
Free to grasp storm-filled sighs.

Symphonies sing with each thunderous clasp,
Two bodies unite in breathless gasp.
Oiled of sweet sweat's sensation,
Ravishing, as one, beyond completion.
Monsoons of lust, as the tempest transforms,
Seducing him, this Mistress of Storms.

Author notes

Title per Bruce Cockburn


For my Stormy, with love!
Written November 5th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 7, 2006
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    Thank you for commenting.

    Storm

  • November 7, 2006
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    such elegance in this poem, magnificent piece, i love it

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 6, 2006
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    Thank you Ktulu, appreciate your comment.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 6, 2006
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    It just so happened to pop in that I was able to use the name of yours that you wrote yesterday. Glad you like, thank you for the comments love.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 6, 2006
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    Thank you John, appreciate your comments.

    Storm

  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    November 6, 2006
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    WOW...thsi is not only very erotic adn sensual but very passionate as well. I loved it.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*

  • light insight silver member
    November 6, 2006
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    Beautiful

    What a wonderful flowing piece you have rendered here. Not to mention flattering. Stormy Weathers aka The Weatherman is indeed a fortunate soul. Thanks!
  • SoulWhispher
    November 6, 2006
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    great

    Again you have worked the magic of the storms, so well written with such a great flow and rthym, you have captured the essence of the storm, great Job, Blessings John

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 5, 2006
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    Thank you Tes, I appreciate the comments, and the compliment. The title is based off an instrament song, I will have to go back and listen to it now and see if it fits, lol. I'm glad you enjoyed.

    Hugs
    Storm

  • Angels Delight
    November 5, 2006
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    Stunning

    Sis...

    I am once again left speechless by the Goddess that writes with so much passion and love and I wish I knew what else to say because you just blow me away with everything you write...

    This was like a song in my head as I read each line...It flowed perfectly and I am so happy that I read this it this morning...

    Love ya
    Tes

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 5, 2006
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    Thank you Sandy, appreciate your comments.

    Storm

  • Heavenly Angel
    November 5, 2006
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    Beautifully seductive and sensual; love it!
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