Cracks in the sky when the sun is shining,
makes me wonder is that you smiling?
Watching me from way up high,
The rays of light are the twinkle of your eyes.
The fluffy clouds they are discreet a wonderful place to have a seat.
That little bird that just flew by,
reminds me of you and the love you provide.
Though seeing your face is a small treasure,
The love that you left me is hard to measure.
When the clouds go gray and the rain it pours and the clouds seem full of slamming doors.
My heart it aches for it is dieing,
as the sky lets down with my angel crying.
The angel you were as I walked Through my life ,
was on my shoulder but now she must fly.
She was needed in heaven for helping others get by.
So to you my angel I write this note to let you know your felt in my soul,
soon the road that leads to heaven will drop for me
when my time has been given.
As I walk the path that's paved with gold running for your arms that hold I realize what its all about . . . .
Believing in love without a doubt.
Author notes
I have never put my poetry out there like this so I welcome your criticism with an open mind . . .but please do try to be kind.This poem is an emotional dedication to my Grandmother may she R.I.P 06-31-06
Written November 5th, 2006
A contest entry
- Make Me Cry. by unoodostres.
300 points, ended November 6, 2006, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - He Took his Own Life! Please... comfort poems needed... by Periwinkle Blue.
475 points, ended May 1, 2007, 20 entries
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i don't know if this is the other poem that you entered in the contest "most improved" but this too is very heartfelt and full of emotion. if this is the first thing you have ever written....wow....it's great and full of emotion...this is a wonderful dedication to someone who meant so much to you....be well and be blessed
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Grabbing the buckets again. Butterflykisses, this is truly inspirational, compassionate, comforting and is helping to ease my soul filled with pain and grief over the death of my cousin. Thanks so much. Patti
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You worked really hard on this and we appreciate your wonderful thoughts!
Thank you so much for bringing this sweet message to us in our comfort contest!
You have a very big heart, I can tell, and show so much love in this poem. 
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thank you i appreciate it. please im me sometime .
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aw hun. this is so good. im sorry about all of this. thanks for entering though!!
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