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Another Try At A Love Song

I think this might strike deep in you
I'll sing it either way
You know it's coming from my heart
You're pretty as the day
I know things may not be perfect
We won't always get along
But you can believe in me baby
I'll be there when something's wrong

Let me pull you close and hold you
We'll get through this
A day at a time
You know that as long as I'm with you
I swear, I'll be fine

I'll get to you no matter what
By plane, train or car
As long as I end up by your side
I'll go however far
Take my hand, we'll lay and rest
We'll watch the sun rise and set
We'll wish upon the stars at night
And cuddle under soft moonlight

The most powerful words I can say
They mean more to me every day
I love you...
I love you

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Written November 5th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Florida Sunshine
    May 29, 2007
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    I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem~ Keep up the good work~ Good luck to you in the contest!

  • EmeraldDaze
    May 11, 2007

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    Aww... I liked this song. I wish I could hear it, but it was good even without the music. It flowed well. Can't really say I relate, yet, but I loved the emotions portrayed in your song. Thank you for entering my contest.

  • ghost with the most
    December 11, 2006
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    tiiiight

    im writing an acuostic song with these lyrics right now.