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13 faced Poem

the is wonderful
the was too
I am very
you are too

with a and a
we must say our
with and
*bird* chirps 'hurry on'

you are an
i know where to turn when i'm
and call for

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Written November 5th, 2006

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  • WhollySurrendered
    August 4, 2007
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    thanks for entering and good luck.


  • The Burning Year
    November 7, 2006
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    haha
    In all my time on allpoetry I can say I've never seen this..great job..HAHA!!!


  • NoWayJo
    November 5, 2006
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    This is so very sweet, Teddibly--From the title down it is--(13 Faces it is)! When I first clicked on all the little emoticons had that brief moment of life where the hugged and the kissed and it was so precious reading how you wrote those emoticons and the and into this poem!

    Thank you for this great entry!

    Jo


  • Melodies
    November 5, 2006
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    You are so right! We should all and for ! A darling poem, and you know... I love the smileys and use them by the gallons.