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Lilly

Lamenting soul comforted by shadow and  
Insanity's blanket of familiar insecurities.
Languid lady bleeding to break the numbness of
Life's slothful progression through a grayness that
Youth cannot break through with such an old soul.

Author notes

"I have read all these rules"

This is for a contest asking for an acrostic of your name.
Written November 5th, 2006

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  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    November 7, 2006
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    Beautiful backround you have here. And a beautiful name too! Good luck in the contest! I'm in it as well.

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker who lost all aka Sacred Shadows


  • Amun-Ra
    November 5, 2006
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    This is a great write, but I feel that youth just might be what you need to feel alive. Relax and just let your mind take you away. Anything is possible Ms. Lilly just believe. My fav line would be

    Insanity's blanket of familiar insecurities.
    Whad are you insecure about? Thats anyone, your no less of a person contrary to whadeva you believe.


  • November 5, 2006
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    Very well done- I really liked what you came up with here- I wish you all the luck there is in my contest that you have entered- Thank you