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Only A Little

Caressing curves, awaiting for a sign
lips and tongue added shall make you mine.
Nibbling tender areas, too early for a bite
punishing the both of us until the time is right.

Wrists shackled to the bed, ankles included too
blindfolding your eyes, only darkness for you.
Next shall come the gag, hope you like the taste
soon you shall be screaming, so this won't go to waste.


Fingers play with tiny mounds, until they are erect
nibbling on them afterwards shall add to the effect.
While mouth is busy, fingers trail down satin skin
parting flesh, they explore the wetness within.

Rise and fall of breath as the pace quickens
what a lovely reaction as the wetness thickens.
Fingers gone, now breath has been replaced
not before tongue dives in for a taste.

Tongue lapping at your wetness, hands travel above 
and wrap around that lovely neck, something that you love.
Gripping harder, as tongue dives deep within
your body is shaking, ultimate pleasure you shall win.


Releasing wonderful liquids as the grip is released
on those excess juices tongue can finally feast.
Although your body's relaxing, the fun is not done yet
for ultimate pleasure you have yet to get.

Metal meets flesh, yearning for a feel
you're shaking, yes my love it's real.
Dragging down your thigh, blood mingles on the tip
soon that lovely liquid shall be licked off lips.

Several more repeated, all in the same design
your body responding, now you shall be mine.
Untying you,leaving you alone on the bed 
Supressing a smile as my desire's been fed.

Author notes

I too enjoy being choked during sex, but I am also into the whole slave/master thing. Hopefully this is what you're looking for. I had a great time trying to write this.
Written November 5th, 2006

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  • danceswsquirrels
    November 14, 2006
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    hells yea! that was hot hot hot... I'm not much into the cutting thing.. but the idea still excites me... I just personally wouldn't want to be cut... But that is a completely honest medical issue... but I read this as a happening to some one else type way... and believe me.. it was hot...
    ::nods::

    Tongue lapping at your wetness, hands travel above
    and wrap around that lovely neck, something that you love.
    Gripping harder, as tongue dives deep within

    :: preens ::


    J~~~