Fuck all the fucking times I've fucking bled
And the dolorous fucking tears I've shed
The fucking pain I continuously fucking feel
Fuck reality, sobriety—drugs are fucking real!
GuILty
Fuck this Heart attack, I should've fucking had.
Fuck the fucking happy mask when everyone knows I'm sad.
Maybe tomorrow when I fucking screw things up--again...
Hell will finally fucking take me for all my fucking sins.
OmIniOus
A fuck-up is what I'll always be and what I fucking am.
Anger--anger(fuck, in danger): 'shit-mother-fucker,god-fucking-damn!'
PLEASE forgive me for I know not what I've fucking become!
So horribly numb--so pleasantly, fucking numb.
OmeGA
So fuck you!
--motherfucking fag!
Fuck you!!
Elephant fucking assholes!
Fuck all this
Mother fucking fuckness!
Fuck this shit...
I hate you fucking all!
DrINks
When is, the right fucking moment to leave these fuckers behind?
They fucking think they are right but they sure is Hell are blind!
"Na, but this isn't about you it's about this fat fucker here!"
Oblivious motherfucker you are (Please Print) "I want to disappear!"
Not your fucking fault, but right now I'm fucking pissed!
Slashing your wrists, my wrists--it's how I subsist,how I fucking exist!
I'm an ungrateful fucking selfish fucking whore!
Not the fucking little girl my parents somehow once adored.
BeER
When did this fucktard start to fuck with everyone's head?!
When did these fucking cuts become more than what they said?
To be fucking conformist in the non-conformist way...
When did the fucking line between life and death start to fade away?
YawINg
Well fuck this!
Everything that brings me down.
Fuck fake bliss;
I'll never feel total escasty.
Fuck all these fucked thoughts,
I cant fucking rid of!
Who fucking cares?--I dont,
I fucking dont deserve to be loved!
EteRNiTy.
Author notes
fuck
fucking
fucked
motherfucker
fucker
fucktard
fatfuck
fuck-up
"if your going to use profanity use it properly!!!--intercourse this, intercourse that...fuck fuck fuck--intercourse intercourse intercouse!!!"--lovely inspraition from my aunt, later covered by my dear Mother. 
--arn't i a little fucker or what?
blah.
(poem to basically use the word "fuck" alot alot of times...because i basically fucking feel like it. now, dont i sould like a fucking ass or what...
well you dont have to read this...i know many are against porfanity but dont give me fucking shit about my own dirty mouth!!! not my fault my friend jacked my fucking orbits!!
"everything is funnier with the word "fuck" in it" 
...that it is...that it FUCKING is
(my mouth isnt really this vulgar 
)
"roor"
♥ Lynn
Written November 5th, 2006
A contest entry
- Its always Rainin' in my Head by A.N. Divine.
450 points, ended January 23, 2007, 13 entries
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This is so fucking good!Interesting to read.Sometimes you gotta just get it off your chest,and what better way............
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Hahaha, I love this. Its os raw and distasteful, a true anachoronism.
-C -
nice poem keepo it up
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awesome
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ummm, thanks?!
"fuck was not used after every other word. any i did not rhyme?--im pretty sure the majority of my stanzas have an ending rhyme.
i dont beileve i rhymed fuck with fuck but great idea
alot people seemed to like my rhyming but you are entitled to your own opinion as is everyone else, so tell me if "bled/shed" "feel/real" "had/sad" etc.etc.etc. --dont rhyme...and i'll believe that you actually read my poem
well im glad YOU know i gots it in me... and, my head is always "HIGH"
take care
~Lynn -
Okay---- You know what I am sure you could have made a better poem then this if you did not use the word "Fuck" after every other word you said. You could not even rhyme anything together all you did was rhyme fuck with fuck. Never give up with your writing though I know you have it in you so do your best and keep your head high...
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I fucking like :D
intersting write - Ive had so many fuck everything days Ive lost count!! dont mind the word fuck - I think its a good word, can be used in so many different contexts as you've shown. good write I enjoyed reading it - loads of emotion but the use of fuck every other word makes humourus aswel.
Good fucking job
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I just had to click cause of the title and never have I read or thought the word so much in my entire life and I'm no angel I do feel the pain of addiction and depression in this one sorry for your hurt...
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fuck, that is the most fuckin amazing thing ever.
rock on fucker!
Meri xxx -
fucking good work get the fuckin anger out.<3
loves it.
p.s i'd put this in the adult category u mite get some complaints.<3 xxx
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i fucking love this fuckin piece. it's fuckin amazing!!!! Absolutely fucking love this shit!
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Oh...it is so good to hear that somebody else also have these f* everything days...I thought it was only me...I can really associate with this poem. For myself, however, I think I usually feel this way when I don't have control over things around me and I feel that people are taking advantage of me! Well done.
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ahhh, when anger and sadness and pain get so overwhelming, they become almost humorous. i can't tell you how many fights i've ended because i just start laughing.
sometimes the best way to deal with all the negative is just laughing about it. i don't think this could have better shown that final point of grief and exasperation.
well fucking said!
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Fucking awesome, for this, I applaud you.
Fuckity, fuck, fuck, fucker. See? It's not hurting anybody, *acts like a conductor, waving a chopstick in the air* Raise the chorus!
Anyway, I love this. It's funny, it's creative, and yet it also means something. Good job. I like the "Goodbye" thing as well, I was looking at all the other letters in those words that were capitalized and getting no where, then when I scrolled down someone had done the looking and figuring out for me.
The fact that you did this in almost a classy way with the flawless rhyme and such is awesome as well.
-Allura -
i want to critique this but.... fuck it.
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Whoa awesome job on this man. I started to read it because of the title, but continued because of the talent. My favorite part was Fuck the fucking happy mask when everyone knows im sad. Ain't that the fucking truth
anyways good job 2 stoner thumbs up!!
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"Fuck this Heart attack, I should of fucking had."
should this be "should have fucking had" ?
interesting idea for a poem, it was a fun read, keep up the good work -
Dude, that's fucking amazing.
Great job, really. I wish I was this creative : ).
Anyways, great read, I'll keep readin' your's.
Peace and love
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Fuck awsome shit motherfucker!! I fucking love this, it's fucking great and really tells everyone to get fucked! My fucking god I can relate to this so fucking well, this is how I feel a lot of the fucking time. I like the "GOODBYE" thing too, I didn't notice it until I saw the comment above, clever. So great fucking job!
~Skye -
simply darling ;)
dude!
normall when people say fuck they sound retarded and dumb as shit as if theyre afraid to use profanity but i like really enjoy how oyu use it. Seriously it goes really well together and a lot of people dont know how to do that while using profanity at the same time. Great work!
i love the word fuck!
haha
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you said what alot of people don't have the guts to say(including myself) because they let "morals" or fear get in the way but sometimes ya have to say the hell with it and say wahts on your mind congrats and kudos
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fan-fucking-tabulous
I like it lol... even with the surplus of fuck... you still used it really well to get your feelings across... feelings I think I can relate to quite I bit.. me gusta muchisimo! ^.^ -
Angry and entertaining!
Entertainingly dark, and very good use of the word 'fuck'. I've heard it in so many different contexts, and you seem to know how and when to use it. I love your work, it resembles my daily thoughts, haha! This was funny, in an 'I know the feeling so this to me is hilarious' kind of way. Always funnier when you really know.
Keep up the great work
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*Laughs histarically* This is fuckin awsome! Sorry your so upset but it's a treat, this poem. I love repition of the many variations of the word Fuck. Love this poem... *Continues to laugh*
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AMAZING
this write was amazing, it was quite funny at times, use of this word in a poem like this, i was quite happy after reading it, brought me a smile
fucktard ftw -
this was pretty fucking cool =]] it worked. keep it up! and im sorry bout your orbits man.... =]
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fuck...that was soo fucking crazy....i fucking loved it!
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i love the word "fucktard"
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haha its stright, thanks for commenting hey, at least you commented! i didnt think i would get much for this write.
im glad you liked it! haha ranting
this poem is weird..lots of cussing and whatnot, and even sort of an acrostic?
well the one word lines downward spell "GOODBYE"
how can one be a whimpy poet /
i'll be sure to check yours out!
thanks again
peace!
♥ Lynn -
Um, rant much? This I how I wish my poetry could be, but I am too wimpy. Damn. I like how you cleared everything up in the title, too (for all those sick-oes who think that fuck only has to do with sex). Shit. No matter how I try and type this comment, it always ends up sounding corny. I think I should shut up now.
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Intense
Normally I'm not one for profanity but this works for me. It screams anger, frustration - screams it till I am hoarse from reading it aloud. -
i think this is a very good poem....the cuss words actually work with the poem..and i don't usually condone cussing....anyway, very good poem....
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orbits...gum...
"anyhell"--thanks kid
for your comments and kind words
♥ ya always!!!
~Lynn -
brutal,so harsh
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Haunting
orbits ?
anyhell,loved the write.
the anger is intense,
the sadness is heartaching (stay strong you)
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Haunting
orbits ?
anyhell,loved the write.
the anger is intense,
the sadness is heartaching (stay strong you)
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its alright
wow this is a kinda good poem jus make it longer
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