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hors d'oeuvre (incomplete)





[...]
and yes i beg for mercy, still
the crimson ink just drowns my quill.
my fears, the tears i dare not spill
are trapped inside, t'is me they kill !

AWAY ! AWAY !
flee from me retched demons of despair !
right back to hell, to your putrid lair !
[...]

Author notes

not done yet...give me some time to figure it out...
Written November 5th, 2006

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  • less than a poet
    November 5, 2006
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    well Nour is right till now it is great


  • Nour Beydoun
    November 5, 2006
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    well.. take your time ... i think it's gonna be really good..