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She was

She was sitting there waiting
Waiting for anything to come
To make her change her mind

She was giving them one last chance
A chance to save her
But they must not have been informed

She just sat there waiting to be saved
She hoped that the people would stop passing her

After days of waiting someone came
But she didn't respond to them
They were to late to save her

She was gone
Never to be heard from again

They left her,
So she left them

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Written November 5th, 2006

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  • whispering shadow
    June 6, 2007
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    devine - inspiring -
    straight to the hart as a knife
    Anarnon3-vividghost :-) :-) :->


  • Kimmehh
    November 6, 2006
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    nice poem brandy. reminds me of myself at times. i am sorry you feel that way. you know if i were still there i would have talked to you. cause i love you. yep yep i do.
    -kimmie