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It Ends Tonight

Broken hearted
falling down
slowly fading
to the ground

body's numb
numb with pain
heart is breaking
going insane

looking back
hurts me so
breaks me down
then lets me go

should i run
or should i hide
as it slowly
takes away my pride.

is this wrong
or is this right
tell me now or
it ends tonight

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Written November 5th, 2006

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  • Kanadian Kitty
    November 13, 2006
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    I really enjoyed reading this work. I have not been around a lot but I always try to read your works when i stop by. I hope you keep writing because I really enjoy your words.

  • Music-is-life
    November 8, 2006
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    I like this one!!!!