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Dena

Divine creation of nature's light
Empowering, both day and night
Nurturing life through birth's name
A Goddess born of the mortal plane

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Unfortunately, for this contest, my name is only 4 letters long, making it a challenge to put it up there.  But my name is in Hebrew and Native American origin, meaning divine; and in Old English, meaning vindicated or from the valley.


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Written November 5th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 7, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment, much appreciated.

    Storm
  • Leaving Today
    November 7, 2006
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    great work...all four lines are so powerful. good poem.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 5, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 5, 2006
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    Thank you Adrian, got lucky that one of the meanings of my name fit in there, lol.

    Storm

  • November 5, 2006
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    Thank you for entering this contest and I wish you all the luck there is

  • WarrioroftheHeart
    November 5, 2006
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    You did a great job at defining yourself in four lines.
    Good luck in the contest
    Adrian

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 5, 2006
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    Thank you love, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • light insight silver member
    November 5, 2006
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    PERFECT

    Amen to that!!! I couldn't have said it better myself.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 5, 2006
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    Thank you Brian, appreciate it. Until now, very few here knew my real name.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 5, 2006
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    Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot to me.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 5, 2006
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    Thank you Sandy, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    November 5, 2006
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    Excellent

    This is a brilliant use of your reall name and fits you perfectly wishing you all the best in this contest Brian.

  • Stardust-luvr
    November 5, 2006
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    My dear friend your write fits perfectly with your true self and personality as a storm is also enpowering and a entity of nature whether day or night. nice to meet you formally Dena and whether your name is 4 letters or 10 letters you are a one of a kind person and friend

  • Heavenly Angel
    November 5, 2006
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    Excellent!!!!! All the best to you, hon!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 5, 2006
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    Thank you for the comments, much appreciated.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 5, 2006
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    Thank you for the comments. Dina is one of the variations of Dena, as there are many. But I always thought Dina to be with the I sound rather than the E sound. I was named after an actress Dina Merrill, so I guess it still has the E to it.

    Sure, grab the background.

    Storm

  • NooNiThEWitcH
    November 5, 2006
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    This is really cool. I have some friends with the same name but they write it "Dina" I am not quite sure if it is stil the same but anyways, cool write and nice rhyme.
    I love your background and it matches the poem perfectly. Do you mind if I take it?

    Keep on writing and good luck in the contest.
    Nooni

  • emilyspicer
    November 5, 2006
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    That was a great write!!! Good job with the flow and rhyming. My fav, so far. Good luck in the contest.
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