Dear Mother,
You're my grizzly bear, keeping me warm with your fur.
You're my lion, protecting me from harm.
You're my eagle, making sure that I have a full belly.
You're my wolf, teaching me the way of life one step at a time.
You're my mother, loving me... so heart swelling that nothing can break.
Author notes
I Love You mom, so much!!!!!!!!!
Written November 5th, 2006
A contest entry
- For the kids 14 and under: LOVE LETTERS TO MOM! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended November 8, 2006, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ages 13 and Under ONLY ~ Everybody loves somebody by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended September 30, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happy Poems of all sorts by kids to age 13 by Periwinkle Blue.
550 points, ended January 4, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mommy I love you!!! by Dancing the Rumba.
850 points, ended February 12, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Very beautiful!!! I love the metaphors.
V
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I am so glad to see such a beautiful poem about loving your mother. Yes, truly, this is excellent.
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I am a mom and I have to say I would cry if my daughter ever wrote something like this for me
This really shows the love you have for your mom. Well Done!
Blessings
Bel
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oh man, I'm not a mom but if I were I would be so very touched by this piece. It is all heart and you did well with your comparisions
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OMG OMG OMG!!! I loved this!!!
It was REALLY good. I loved how you made every line about a different animal and how your mother treats you like they do. Definitely deserve a gold trophy. Very nice, good luck in the other contest!!
~Pandy~
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A gold trophy... I am SO proud of you!
Oh, my goodness, Leo 101... Angelo... I am so proud of you, I could just burst!
What a wonderful poem this is. 
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WOW,
this is beautiful! HOW TOUCHING. Your mother must have been proud if she has read this poem. No wonder it is a Gold trophy winner. YOU DESERVE IT...
your AP sis,
rimps the pimps.
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An Awesome Poem!
OH MY GOSH... This poem is just fabulous! It's right from the heart and makes me so proud of you, Angelo! And hey, look at those two gold trophies out there on your page!
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Awwww Angelo. YOu're such an angelic son. Your mom is quite blessed to have you in her life. She, along with God and your guardian angel, brought you into this world and love keeps you and your mom bonded. Thanks so much for sharing this and entering my contest. Great to have you, bro. Good luck.
Brian
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