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Pictures In The Sky

Laying on my back
Looking into the sky
I can see a car go rolling by


Over there a teddy bear
A duck, an elephant
There is so many things to see


Let you imagination
Run wild create a vision
See there two lover holding hands


The angels must be having fun
Or maybe it's aliens
Who makes those pictures in the sky

Author notes

Just a fun ditty
Written November 4th, 2006

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  • Sandygram silver member
    November 6, 2006
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    BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Hi Charlie, This was such a sweet poem. It made me smile. Thank you, you write such wonderful poetry that touches so many souls here. You are a blessing in my life and so many others. God Bless you. You take care. Love, Sandy



    It isn't aliens or even angels
    That give us these picturisque sensations
    Laying on a hilltop or meadow
    It is given by our imaginations
    Wide eyed wonders of puffy white
    Ducks and geese and hearts out of tune
    Camels with humps and cats with wiskers
    Seen on those clear days in June.


  • Broken-Rickie
    November 6, 2006
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    Cool write Dad...I can't remember the last time I looked at clouds like I use to growing up back home in GA...Stay safe!


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    November 5, 2006
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    This is lovely Charlie, i do this often, my kids and i always play this we game when we drive to Donegal. i love to crate pictures out of the clouds. good luck. Dolores


  • Sitara
    November 5, 2006
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    So sweetly written.
    Edited on Nov 05, 6:58 because ''.

  • June-bug
    November 5, 2006
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    Very cute and fun write, I thought I was the only adult left who did this so I just kept it to myself. LOL


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 4, 2006
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    Rated F, for Fun!

    Fun, fun, fun!! I'm glad someone out there
    knows how to relax and enjoy life as it is,
    not as we wish it could be... A fun poem!!

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